Word-for-word translation delivers the meaning however, in most cases, the sentence structure and grammar are ignored. On the other hand, the client ends up with losing customers.
Incorrect spell for ‘Mexico’
Several space errors
Grammatical errors in sentence structure
Does Delta rip off its customers? $5,000 for taxes!! The numeric value was not proofread properly.
The Easier-to-Redeem 2015 SkyMiles
사용이 더욱 쉬워지는 2015 스카이마일스 프로그램
->The noun ‘use’ doesn’t agree to ‘program’ since the program itself is not a visible hand-carrying tool. It is also not consistent with the term in the body paragraph using an alternative spell. The beginning part also sounds awkward due to the inappropriate inanimated subject.
Enjoy up to 4 more inches of legroom, Priority Boarding and seating in the first few rows of the Economy Class cabin. On most long-haul international flights you’ll also experience up to 50% more recline. All international routes include complimentary beer, wine and spirits.
모든 국제선 항공편에서는 맥주, 와인, 증류주가 무료로 제공됩니다.
->space error in source and target. The html code must be checked.
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델타항공을 이용하셔서 항공권 및 호텔 등의 특별 할인을 적용 받으세요.
->The verb part sounds awkward due to an inappropriate passive form.
->The currency unit ‘KRW’ and the preposition ‘from’ are not consistent. The phrases are confusing since the same term reads a noun form as well as a directional adverb form, respectively. It is a common error when proofreading is not done properly.