Google YouTube: Awkwardly literal 10

source: https://www.youtube.com/yt/advertise/en/
target: https://www.youtube.com/yt/advertise/ko/

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높은 도달률
동영상 광고로 적시에 적절한 사용자에게 메시지를 전달하세요. 어떠한 비즈니스든 YouTube에서 잠재 고객을 만날 수 있습니다.
->’높은 도달률 (high reachable-rate?)’ doesn’t make sense at all. The two sentences deliver literal meanings so they don’t serve as a promo text.

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Google Groups: awkward nouns 09

source: https://groups.google.com/forum/?hl=en#!overview
target: https://groups.google.com/forum/?hl=ko#!overview

Groups
그룹스
->An alien term.

Keyboard shortcuts and a streamlined design mean you won’t spend time waiting to read and get involved.
키보드 단축키와 간편한 디자인으로 원하는 동작을 바로 실행할 수 있습니다.
->’동작(action)’ doesn’t fit in context.

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delta.com 델타항공: awkward wordings 33

source: http://www.delta.com
target:  http://ko.delta.com

The Easier-to-Redeem 2015 SkyMiles
사용이 더욱 쉬워지는 2015 스카이마일스 프로그램
->The noun ‘use’ doesn’t agree to ‘program’ since the program itself is not a visible hand-carrying tool. It is also not consistent with the term in the body paragraph using an alternative spell. The beginning part also sounds awkward due to the inappropriate inanimated subject.

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모든 국제선 항공편에서는 맥주, 와인, 증류주가 무료로 제공됩니다.
->space error in source and target. The html code must be checked.

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델타항공을 이용하셔서 항공권 및 호텔 등의 특별 할인을 적용 받으세요.
->The verb part sounds awkward due to an inappropriate passive form.

 

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