Google YouTube Copyright: broken grammar 05

source: http://www.youtube.com/yt/copyright/en/
target: http://www.youtube.com/yt/copyright/ko/

In the sections below, you’ll find access to all the information and tools needed to manage your rights on the YouTube platform and learn more about respecting the rights of other creators.
다음 섹션에서는 YouTube 플랫폼에서 저작권을 관리하는 데 필요한 모든 정보와 도구가 소개되고 다른 제작자의 권리와 관련된 자세한 내용을 알아볼 수 있습니다.
->The sentence sounds awkward due to the literal meaning. The sentence structure follows English grammar so the verb ‘needed to manage’ reads awkward passive form.

If you would like to submit a notification of alleged copyright infringement, get information on what to do if you believe your video has been removed in error, or get information on how to dispute a Content ID match, the resources below will help educate you about our easy-to-use rights management processes.
저작권 침해가 의심되어 신고서를 제출하거나, 본인의 동영상이 잘못 삭제되었다고 판단되는 경우 수행할 조치에 대해 알아보거나, 콘텐츠 ID 일치에 대해 이의를 제기하는 방법을 알아보려는 경우 아래의 리소스에서 사용하기 쉬운 YouTube의 저작권 관리 절차를 참조하세요.
->Due to the incorrect punctuations in two parallel adverb phrases, the sentence doesn’t deliver the meaning.

Request the reinstatement of a video that was incorrectly removed from YouTube for copyright infringement.
저작권 침해를 이유로 YouTube에서 잘못 삭제한 동영상의 복원을 요청합니다.
->The sentence sounds awkward due to the dictionary meaning of ‘incorrectly’.

If your question is not answered here, please search our Help Center, where you will find additional information.
여기에서 문제에 대한 답을 얻지 못하면 YouTube 도움말 센터를 검색하세요.
->The sentence follows English grammar. The noun ending for ‘Help Center’ should read a directional adverb in context.

Differentiate between a Content ID claim and a copyright removal.
콘텐츠 ID 일치가 잘못되었다고 생각되는 동영상에 대해 이의를 제기합니다.
->The sentence follows English grammar.

If you received a copyright strike, learn why and the best way to resolve it.
저작권 위반 경고를 받으면 그 이유와 최상의 해결 방법을 알아보세요.
>The sentence doesn’t make sense at all since the main clause doesn’t agree to the subordinate clause in context.

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