delta.com 델타항공: semantically broken 26

source: https://www.delta.com/content/www/en_US/traveling-with-us/planning-a-trip/delta-messenger-flight-notifications.html
target: https://ko.delta.com/content/www/en_US/traveling-with-us/planning-a-trip/delta-messenger-flight-notifications.html

Delta Messenger Flight Notifications & Alerts | Delta Air Lines:
델타 메신전 항공편 통지 및 주의사항 | Delta Air Lines:
->Page title contains a typo.

<meta name=”description” content=”Be one step ahead of all cancellations, delays and schedule changes by subscribing to get flight updates or one-time alerts for a specific flight.”/>
<meta name=”description” content=”항공편 일정 업데이트를 신청하시거나 특정 항공편을 위한 공지를 일시적으로 신청하시면 항공편 취소, 지연, 일정 변경에 대한 통지를 미리  받아보실 수 있습니다.”/>
->Meta description contains a punctuation error and sounds awkward. “by subscribing” reads “by subscribing temporarily” which is incorrectly rephrased.

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