eurail.com 유레일: semantically broken 29

source: http://www.eurail.com/help/choosing-pass/what-does-every-day-within-1-month-mean
target: http://kr.eurail.com/help/choosing-pass/what-does-every-day-within-1-month-mean

A pass with “1 month continuous” means that each day during a period of 1 month is a potential travel day during which you can travel by train.
“1개월 연속” 패스의 경우 1개월의 기간 동안 모든 날이 열차로 이동하는 여행일이 될 수 있습니다.
->The verb doesn’t agree to the subject so the sentence sounds awkward.

If you order a Global Pass – 21 continuous days and you activate your pass to be valid from August 1 to August 21, you can travel by train on every single day during that period – if you want to.
글로벌 패스 – 21일 연속을 구매하시고 8월 1일부터 8월 21일까지 유효하도록 패스 인증을 하시면, 그 기간 동안 원하시는 대로 매일 열차 여행을 하실 수 있습니다.
->’you activate your pass’ follows English grammar so the verb doesn’t agree to the subject.

Available with the Global Pass
글로벌 패스와 함께 이용 가능
->’available’ reads an inappropriate noun in context. Two different meanings are not differentiated in the URL.

Select Passes, Regional Passes and One Country Passes are only available with a select number of travel days.The Eurail Global Pass is available valid for: 15 days, 21 days, 1 month, 2 months or 3 months continuous.
셀렉트 패스, 리저널 패스 그리고 원컨트리 패스는 단지 선택한 여행 일수만큼만 이용 가능합니다.
->’available’ reads an inappropriate noun in context. Two different meanings are not differentiated in the URL.

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->’give’ sounds awkward since it is not a standard tone. The other verb ‘was helpful’ doesn’t read a proper honorific ending.

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