LinkedIn.com 링크드인: semantically broken 06

source: https://www.linkedin.com/settings/?trk=hb_acc&urlhash=IjHB&urlhash=hHeO&_l=en
target: https://www.linkedin.com/settings/?trk=hb_acc&urlhash=IjHB&urlhash=hHeO&urlhash=lcYj&_l=ko

Manage settings for Linkedin plugins on third-party sites
LinkedIn 플러그인 설정을 제3자 사이트에서 관리하기
->Translation delivers an incorrect meaning by saying ‘configuring LinkedIn settings at third-party sites.’ A third-party site won’t have any admin panel to adjust LinkedIn settings.

If you’re signed in to LinkedIn when you view any page that uses our professional plugins, we receive information that you’ve visited that page. This allows us to improve your LinkedIn experience and provide you with insights from your professional network, like how many of your connections have shared an article into LinkedIn using the Share on LinkedIn plugin.
LinkedIn에 로그인하신 상태에서, 프로페셔널 플러그인을 사용하는 페이지를 보시면 해당 페이지를 방문하셨다는 정보가 LinkedIn으로 전송됩니다. 이 정보는 LinkedIn의 사용자 경험을 개선하고 비즈니스 1촌에서 나온 정보를 제공해 드리는 데 사용됩니다. 이를 테면, LinkedIn의 공유 플러그인을 이용하여 기사를 공유하시는 경우, 1촌 몇 명과 공유하셨는지 등의 정보가 제공됩니다.
->The translation delivers dictionary meanings. ‘professional plugins’ is taken as a pronoun which is meaningless in context. ‘when you view’ doesn’t literally mean ‘viewing sends info on visited pages.’ There is a typo, 이를 테면.

Yes, allow LinkedIn to receive information about my visits to pages that use LinkedIn plugins.
네. LinkedIn 플러그인이 있는 페이지를 제가 방문한 정보를 LinkedIn에서 받아보도록 허용합니다.
->The sentence reads double objectives so the meaning is not clear.

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