delta.com 델타항공: semantically broken 16

source: https://www.delta.com/content/www/en_US/traveling-with-us/baggage.html
target: https://ko.delta.com/content/www/en_US/traveling-with-us/baggage.html

See which items can be carried onboard at no charge, view current checked baggage fee information and more.
수하물 체크인 전에 이 곳을 클릭하셔서 무료로 기내에 지참할 수 있는 물건과, 체크인 수하물 수수료 등을 확인해 보십시오.
->The verb ‘be carried’ reads dictionary meaning and an improper noun is applied.

We know how important your baggage is to you.
델타는 고객님의 수하물이 얼마나 중요한지 잘 알고 있습니다.
->Indirect question phrase sounds awkward in context.

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