eurail.com 유레일: semantically broken 12

source: http://www.eurail.com/eurail-passes/one-country-pass
target: http://kr.eurail.com/eurail-passes/one-country-pass

Explore Europe’s fascinating countries
The Eurail One Country Pass is the best choice if you want to spend your vacation experiencing 1 European country. Choose from popular countries like Italy and Spain and use regional and high-speed trains to move from one beautiful city center to the next.
유럽의 환상적인 나라들을 경험하십시오
유레일 원컨트리 패스는 유럽 국가 1곳을 집중적으로 경험하면서 휴가를 보내고자 하는 경우에 최상의 선택입니다. 이탈리아와 스페인 등의 인기 있는 국가를 골라 지역 및 고속 열차를 이용해서 아름다운 도시들을 하나씩 둘러보십시오.
->The translations are done with low words. ‘experiencing 1 European country’ reads dictionary meaning and even an unnecessary adverb ‘by focusing’ is shown in translation.

Get your Eurail Italy Rail Pass now!
유레일 이탈리아 레일 패스를 지금 가져가세요!
->The alt text for the image doesn’t read a standard structure so the associated text won’t function as a proper meta data. It delivers a literal meaning, ‘please fetch the Pass now.”

Discover Italy’s rich history and modern culture by train. Visit top cities like Rome, Venice, Florence and Milan. Savour the authentic cuisine and absorb the captivating atmosphere of La Bella Italia.
열차로 여행하시면서 이탈리아의 다채로운 역사와 현대 문화 새롭게 발견해 보십시오. 로마, 베네치아, 피렌체, 밀라노 등의 주요 도시들을 방문하십시오. 정통 요리를 즐기시며 아름다운 이탈리아(La Bella Italia)의 매혹적인 분위기에 빠져보십시오.
->The translation doesn’t read a proper noun ending and the tone of the verb ‘absorb’ doesn’t fit into the context.

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