delta.com 델타항공: semantically broken 09

source : http://www.delta.com/merch/searchHotelAction.action
target: http://kr.delta.com/merch/searchHotelAction.action

SOAK UP THE BENEFITS
BOOK A HOTEL AT DELTA.COM AND EARN MILES WITH EVERY STAY.
혜택을 최대한 누리세요
Delta.com으로 호텔을 예약하시면 숙박일마다 마일이 적립됩니다.
->The title text sounds awkward since ‘maximum’ directly modifies the verb ‘soak up.’ In the second sentence, ‘every stay’ is translated with a dictionary meaning so the translation implies ‘earning miles every night at stay.’

From $00
출발 $00 and 최저 $00
->The lowest price ‘from’ reads two different terms, ‘departure’ and ‘lowest.’

delta_en_09 delta_ko_09

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