scotiabank.com 스코샤뱅크: semantically broken 01

source: http://www.scotiabank.com/ca/en/0,,4357,00.html
target: http://korean.startright.scotiabank.com/ca/en/0,,4357,00.html

Attending school
캐나다 학교 다니기
->The sub-category menu reads a conjugated verb form so the tone is not consistent with other title menu texts.

Whether you are planning on attending a Canadian school or you have children who are planning on attending school in Canada, we are here to help with the information, support and financial advice you need to be successful.
고객님, 또는 고객님의 자녀가 캐나다 학교 입학을 계획하고 계신 경우, Scotiabank는 성공에 필요한 정보, 지원 및 재정 조언을 통해 지원해 드리고 있습니다.
->The sentence follows English grammar so the subject in main clause appears in the middle of the sentence. ‘support and financial advice you need to be successful’ reads a dictionary meaning so sounds awkward. The honorific verb ‘are planning’ also sounds unnatural since it takes two different verbs at same register.

Post-secondary School
고등교육 학교
->The term reads a dictionary meaning so the standard term is not applied. scotiabank_en_01 scotiabank_ko_01

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