eurail.com 유레일: semantically broken 06

source: http://www.eurail.com/eurail-passes
target: http://kr.eurail.com/eurail-passes

A Eurail pass is your key to experiencing Europe how you want. Travel in comfort on Europe’s trains from the center of one fascinating city to the next. And along the way enjoy amazing views of Europe’s diverse scenery as you sit back and relax.
유레일 패스는 원하시는 대로 유럽을 경험할 수 있는 열쇠입니다. 유럽의 열차로 환상적인 도시의 중심에서 다음 도시까지 편안하게 여행해 보십시오. 그리고 여행 내내, 유럽의 아름답고 다양한 경치를 편안하게 앉아서 즐겨 보십시오.
->The sentence follows English grammar. ‘experiencing Europe’, ‘how you want’, ‘along the way’, ‘as you sit back and relax.’

We offer a range of rail passes to fit every travel plan and budget. Fancy country-hopping all over Europe? Prefer to discover a European region or single country? Check out your pass options below and start planning your Eurail adventure today.
저희는 고객님의 다양한 여행 계획과 예산에 맞춘 여러가지 레일 패스를 제공해 드립니다. 유럽 여러 국가들을 돌며 여행하실 계획이십니까? 유럽 인접국들, 또는 한 국가를 여행하길 원하십니까? 패스 선택사항들을 확인하시고 오늘 유레일 탐험을 계획해 보십시오.
->The sentence follows English grammar and verbs don’t agree to subjects. ‘a range of rail passes’ ‘single country’ and ‘Eurail adventure’ deliver dictionary meanings. There is a space error and an inconsistent honorific verb ending.

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->The count of countries delivers dictionary meaning without adding a proper count unit in the table.

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