Dell 델 awkward wordings, punctuation and spelling error

target: http://content.dell.com/kr/ko/business/d/campaigns/windows-8-commercial.aspx

Dell awkward wordings in Korean

 

Dell 은 Windows을 권장합니다.
A space and spelling error

Windows 8에서 할 수 있는 것에 대해 자세히 알아봅니다 (please see what you can do with Windows 8)
The sentence reads literal, which sounds awkward.
It should be rephrased like Windows 8의 다양한 기능을 확인해 보십시오 (please find out the new features in Windows 8).

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