shopMCM broken systax and minimal grammar

http://shopMCM.com

broken grammar in Korean

broken grammar in Korean

Broken Korean
정신이 녹아져 있는 (literally, immersed into/incorporated with wildlife mentality)

Several space errors in description.
How many are there in the highlighted area? (more than 6 in conservative way)

Awkward/unreadable wordings
누적 금액별 해당하는 등급
shop MCM을 통하여 구매하신 내역만 (only for the purchase via shop MCM)  vs On-Line Outlet 상품을 구매하신 내역은 제외 (excep for the purchase via On-Line Outlet): What about the purchase of MCM product via On-Line Outlet?

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