delta.com 델타항공: awkward wordings 33

source: http://www.delta.com
target:  http://ko.delta.com

The Easier-to-Redeem 2015 SkyMiles
사용이 더욱 쉬워지는 2015 스카이마일스 프로그램
->The noun ‘use’ doesn’t agree to ‘program’ since the program itself is not a visible hand-carrying tool. It is also not consistent with the term in the body paragraph using an alternative spell. The beginning part also sounds awkward due to the inappropriate inanimated subject.

Enjoy up to 4 more inches of legroom, Priority Boarding and seating in the first few rows of the Economy Class cabin. On most long-haul international flights you’ll also experience up to 50% more recline.  All international routes include complimentary beer, wine and spirits.
모든 국제선 항공편에서는 맥주, 와인, 증류주가 무료로 제공됩니다.
->space error in source and target. The html code must be checked.

Plan your next getaway with exclusive deals from Delta on flights, hotels, and more.
델타항공을 이용하셔서 항공권 및 호텔 등의 특별 할인을 적용 받으세요.
->The verb part sounds awkward due to an inappropriate passive form.

 

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delta.com 델타항공: inconsistency 32

source: http://www.delta.com/content/www/en_US/shop/deals-and-offers/asia-pacific/seoul-be-flights.html?icid=AsiaFS-KR-BE-TP
source: http://www.delta.com/content/www/en_US/shop/deals-and-offers/asia-pacific/seoul-flights.html?icid=AsiaFS-KR-EC-TP

target: http://ko.delta.com/content/www/en_US/shop/deals-and-offers/asia-pacific/seoul-be-flights.html?icid=AsiaFS-KR-BE-TP
target: http://ko.delta.com/content/www/en_US/shop/deals-and-offers/asia-pacific/seoul-flights.html?icid=AsiaFS-KR-EC-TP

From KRW3,000,000
->The currency unit ‘KRW’ and the preposition ‘from’ are not consistent. The phrases are confusing since the same term reads a noun form as well as a directional adverb form, respectively. It is a common error when proofreading is not done properly.

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Google Chrome: Literal meanings with broken grammar 08

source: https://support.google.com/chrome/answer/2765944?hl=en&ref_topic=3227046
target: https://support.google.com/chrome/answer/2765944?hl=ko&ref_topic=3227046

Routinely scan your computer for malware
컴퓨터에서 주기적으로 악성코드 검사
->Literal meaning sounds awkward. Since malwares are scanned in computer, the directional verb ending won’t be appropriate in terms of sentence flow.

Uninstall unfamiliar or suspicious extensions
낯설거나 확장 프로그램 제거
->The second adjective ‘suspicious’ is missing in translation so the string doesn’t make sense at all.

Uninstall suspicious programs from your computer that you don’t remember installing.
컴퓨터에 설치한 적이 없는 의심스러운 프로그램 제거
->’don’t remember installing’ doesn’t follow the source. It reads ‘never installed’

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delta.com 델타항공: semantically broken 31

source: http://www.delta.com/content/www/en_US/skymiles/about-skymiles/million-miler-status.html
target: http://ko.delta.com/content/www/en_US/skymiles/about-skymiles/million-miler-status.html

Delta flyers who reach one million Medallion Qualification Miles (MQMs) gain extra perks. Review the advantages of being a Million Miler.
백만 메달리온 자격마일(MQM)이 넘는 델타 고객님들께서는 추가 혜택을 받으시게 됩니다. 밀리언 마일러가 받는 혜택을 확인해 보세요.
->MQM branding is inconsistently spelled. The term reads ‘million medallion’ in Korean, which is different from the other term in the title.

There are few expressions of loyalty like those demonstrated by our Million Milers™.
밀리언 마일러가 보여드리는 것과 같은 로열티에 대한 표현이 몇가지 있습니다.
->Literal translation makes the meaning out of context.

Complimentary annual Medallion status is awarded annually and is valid from beginning to end of Medallion calendar.
무료 연간 메달리온 자격은 1년 마다 제공되며, 메달리온 달력의 시작부터 마지막까지 유효합니다.
->Dictionary meaning for ‘calendar’ doesn’t fit in context.

Offers and benefits subject to change without notice.
Offers and benefits subject to change.
혜택과 특전은 사전 통지없이 변경될 수 있습니다.
특전 및 혜택은 변경될 수 있습니다.
->Unnecessary redundant in source and target.

To review the rules, please visit Membership Guide & Program Rules.
규정을 검토하시려면 회원 안내서 및 프로그램 규정으로 이동하세요.
->The term ‘review’ reads a dictionary meaning so it sounds awkward in context.

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apple.com 애플: semantically broken 05

source: http://support.apple.com/kb/HT5949?viewlocale=en_US
target: http://support.apple.com/kb/HT5949?viewlocale=ko_KR

To fit within the Home button, the Touch ID sensor is only 170 microns thin, not much thicker than a human hair.
홈 단추 크기에 맞춰 Touch ID 센서의 두께는 사람의 머리카락보다 그리 두껍지 않은 170미크론에 불과합니다.
->The sentence doesn’t make sense since the modifying phrase doesn’t flow within the main clause.

It also maps out individual details in the ridges that are smaller than the human eye can see and even inspects minor variations in ridge direction caused by pores and edge structures.
또한 지문 굴곡에서 사람의 눈으로 볼 수 없는 작은 미세한 부분을 매핑하고 구멍 또는 가장자리 구조에 의해 생긴 지문 굴곡 방향의 사소한 차이까지도 점검합니다.
->’pores and edge structures’ reads literal meaning so the meaning is not clear in context whether it indicates the sensor or fingerprints.

Every fingerprint is unique, so it is rare that even a small section of two separate fingerprints are alike enough to register as a match for Touch ID.
모든 지문이 고유하기는 하지만 서로 다른 지문 두 개의 작은 부분이 Touch ID에 일치하는 것으로 등록될 정도로 유사한 경우도 드물게 있습니다.
->’enough to register’ reads literal meaning so it doesn’t fit in context.

The probability of this happening is 1 in 50,000 for one enrolled finger.
이러한 경우가 발생할 수 있는 가능성은 등록된 손가락당 5만분의 1입니다.
->Literal meaning and space error

After restarting your iPhone 5s
iPhone 5s 재시동 후
->awkward noun for ‘restarting’

마지막으로 iPhone 5s의 잠금을 해제한 지 48시간 이상이 경과한 경우
When more than 48 hours have elapsed from the last time you unlocked your iPhone 5s
->awkward wording for ‘last time’

To enter the Touch ID & Passcode setting
Touch ID 및 암호 설정을 입력하려면
->Incomplete sentence and inconsistent ending

This will allow you to create a longer, more complex passcode that is inherently more secure.
본질적으로 훨씬 안전한 암호를 길고 보다 복잡하게 만들 수 있습니다.
->The modifying clause distorts the meaning by saying ‘to create a longer and more complex passcode from an inherently more secure passcode.

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eurail.com 유레일: semantically broken 35

source: http://www.eurail.com/destinations/montenegro/places-visit
target: http://kr.eurail.com/destinations/montenegro/places-visit

Natural wonders in Kolašin
Biogradsko Lake, Montenegro
콜라신(Kolašin)의 자연 경이
몬테네그로, 비오그라드스코(Biogradsko) 호수
-> ‘natural wonders’ reads a dictionary term.

Stop in the fortress town of Kolašin, at the foot of the Bjelasica and Sinjajevina mountains, and take in some fantastic skiing in wintertime. The Biogradska Gora National Park is in the middle of Bjelasica Mountain, between Tara and Lim rivers is amazing. It’s one of only three primeval forests in all of Europe. This lush area also includes tranquil lakes, including Biogradsko Lake, the largest glacier lake in the park. These are a nature-lover’s dream.
벨라시차(Bjelasica) 산과 신야비나(Sinjajevina) 산의 산자락에 위치한 콜라신(Kolašin) 요새 마을에 들리시고, 겨울에는 환상적인 스키를 즐기십시오. 비오그라드스카 고라(Biogradska Gora) 국립공원은 벨라시차(Bjelasica)산 중심과, 타라(Tara)와 림(Lim) 강 사이에 있습니다. 이것은 유럽 전역에서 단지 3개의 원시림중의 하나입니다. 이 울창한 지역에는 고요한 호수, 공원에서 가장 큰 빙하 호수인 비오그라드스코(Biogradsko) 호수도 있습니다. 이곳은 자연을 사랑하는 사람의 낙원입니다.
-> ‘at the foot of’ doesn’t deliver the meaning and sounds awkward since the term ‘mountain’ is repeated. The spell of ‘stop in’ is not correct.  The verb doesn’t agree to the subject part in ‘It’s one of only three primeval forests in all of Europe.’ The last sentence sounds too literal.

A day trip to the dark water
Bay of Kotor, Montenegro
검은 바다로의 하루 여행
몬테네그로, 코토르 만
-> ‘dark water’ delivers a dictionary meaning which doesn’t fit in context.

It’s worth the trip to spend some time in Herceg Novi, a coastal town with plenty of gardens and parks. After that you can head off to the spectacular peninsulas of Boka Kotorska (Bay of Kotor), perhaps one of the most picturesque bays anywhere. With its jetting cliffs and dark blue water, you can discover more than half a dozen islands that make up this popular bay.
풍부한 정원과 공원이 있는 해안 마을 헤르체그노비(Herceg Novi)에서 얼마간 시간을 보내도 좋습니다. 그런 후, 가장 사진 같은 전경의 코토르만에 위치한 보카 코토르스카(Boka Kotorska)의 웅장한 반도로 향하실 수 있습니다. 분출하는 절벽과 검푸른 바다와 함께, 이 유명한 만을 이루는 6개 이상의 섬을 발견할 수 잇습니다.
-> The adjective 풍부한 (plenty of) doesn’t fit in context. The verb ‘can head off’ delivers literal meaning. The verb ‘can discover’ contains a typo.

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